Nice work, looking foward to the real deal
That was good, felt like watching a clip from the show. Not sure about the canned laughter though. It was a little off putting and patronizing. I understand it was used to capture the atmosphere more but I don't think it’s necessary. I just find canned laughter only seems to work in flash cartoons if it’s spoofing something that isn't really funny, still it’s your creation so it’s up to you, who knows you may be the first to make it work.
I wouldn't worry about some of the negative reviews; some people just can't appreciate funny dialogue, red dwarf’s greatest aspect and it has been captured perfectly here. Good luck, looking forward to Blackhole.