With Audio

Great work Chris, even better with the music and sound effects. Although honestly, that live dub you did earlier when soud was not working was pretty fucking impressive. I mean you got the timing and everything. Anyway awsome toon man, it's a great idea and I really like your animation style, the David bit is my favorite.

Mike

Great Stuff

Nice work man, good luck with trophy. I gave you your 5 ;)

The score is way too low

Wow this was just...wow. I'm honestly shocked that this isn't in the higher 4.00 scores, this was clearly more then your average internet toon. Humour, story and seriousness were mostly conveyed visually, you knew how the characters mind worked and could sympathise with him on a bizarre level, and the animation was amazing. This is really up there with the great pieces of art animations of the last 10 decades; I can’t even imagine just how much work must have been put into this.

Please enter this into some respected animation festival and get the recognition you deserve…alright enough ramblings from me, thanks for the great entertainment.